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PC: BlackEyeHawk by landiddy

As the guy who asked for this, I feel like it's only fair if I do a critique. I have no real reason for my support of this couple, outs...

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150 Points/$2 Per Short Story
75 Points/$1 Per Chapter (Min. of 2)
75 Points/$1 Per Poem
150 Points/$2 Per Edit, Proofreading
SCRIPTS PRICES AREN'T FIXED
300 Points/$4 Per Colored Comic PAGE (2 Characters, +75 For Extra)
225 Points/$3 Per BW Comic PAGE (2 Characters, +75 For Extra)
150 Points/$2 Per Colored/Shaded Drawing (2 Characters, +75 For Extra)
75 Points/$1 Per BW/Inked Drawing (2 Characters, +75 For Extra)

I WON'T DRAW/WRITE:
+ Seth McFarlane Works/Sword Art Online
+ Homestruck/Webcomics in general
+ Gore/Guro/Torture Porn
+ Diapering/Weight Gain/Vore/Farting (Most bowel issues)
+ Overmuscle/Extreme fat
+ Live Action TV/Real People (Not counting Star Trek)
+ I won't do anything for you if you provide me with a 'summary' that exceeds 500 words. If your summary is that long, write it yourself. There's no way I can fulfill your expectations exactly.

I WILL DO:
+ Yaoi/Yuri (Especially Yuri)
+ Most Fandoms
+ Transformation
+ Crack Pairings
+ Porn, both Softcore and Hardcore (Will be published on a different site/in a note)
+ Loli/shota

Please ask any question if you have any in the comment below, on my profile, or in a note. I will be glad to work out any problem you have, AND I DO TAKE BUNDLE DISCOUNTS. (Like if you want 3 short stories, I'll charge only 400 points instead of 450)
150 Points/$2 Per Short Story
75 Points/$1 Per Chapter (Min. of 2)
75 Points/$1 Per Poem
150 Points/$2 Per Edit, Proofreading
SCRIPTS PRICES AREN'T FIXED
300 Points/$4 Per Colored Comic PAGE (2 Characters, +75 For Extra)
225 Points/$3 Per BW Comic PAGE (2 Characters, +75 For Extra)
150 Points/$2 Per Colored/Shaded Drawing (2 Characters, +75 For Extra)
75 Points/$1 Per BW/Inked Drawing (2 Characters, +75 For Extra)

I WON'T DRAW/WRITE:
+ Seth McFarlane Works/Sword Art Online
+ Homestruck/Webcomics in general
+ Gore/Guro/Torture Porn
+ Diapering/Weight Gain/Vore/Farting (Most bowel issues)
+ Overmuscle/Extreme fat
+ Live Action TV/Real People (Not counting Star Trek)
+ I won't do anything for you if you provide me with a 'summary' that exceeds 500 words. If your summary is that long, write it yourself. There's no way I can fulfill your expectations exactly.

I WILL DO:
+ Yaoi/Yuri (Especially Yuri)
+ Most Fandoms
+ Transformation
+ Crack Pairings
+ Porn, both Softcore and Hardcore (Will be published on a different site/in a note)
+ Loli/shota

Please ask any question if you have any in the comment below, on my profile, or in a note. I will be glad to work out any problem you have, AND I DO TAKE BUNDLE DISCOUNTS. (Like if you want 3 short stories, I'll charge only 400 points instead of 450)
Tonight was meant to be a big thing for the two. The Seven Swordsmen were playing in town for only three nights, and the tickets they got were only for this very night. Keisuke and Kanade had worked their butts off to get these tickets and it pissed them off big time when their parents told them they couldn’t go because they had plans tomorrow. Naruto needed help repairing the fence and Sakura wanted the two kids to help tend with their medical herb garden. Keisuke didn’t want to waste all the money and got his hands on Dad’s car keys. After Mom and Dad knocked out for the night, Keisuke and Kanade waited half of a hour to be safe before silently running the car out of the driveway and down a neighborhood block before gunning it.

The fifteen-minute drive to the concert stadium would mean they would miss the first five minutes of the concert. But as Keisuke stated, if they hit some of the roads without cops or with bad cameras, they could make it to the opening act. Hey, that means free t-shirts! Kanade relaxed a bit as her brother soared down the roads.

And then a violent jolt suddenly had Kanade lurch forward and nearly bash her against the windshield. The sound of crunching metal only mean bad things…they crashed into another car. She turned to yell at her brother…only to be greeted by a bloody, mangled mess instead. Kanade’s body surged with multiple responses; she screamed out loud in shock, her body shook in fear, and she frantically tore off the seatbuckle to escape and calm down to assess the situation better.

The remaining hours of the day along with the first hours of the new day were a red blur to her. Thankfully her phone hadn’t been crushed in the accident; a fire truck and a ambulance were on scene within minutes. Her brother was still alive, but one paramedic remarked under his breath that Kei might not walk again. At least he was still in one piece. Mom and Dad rushed on scene just as the paramedics loaded up Kei. Kanade could clearly see the two flushed with anger and ready to attack her, but were more worried about Kei and drove her to the hospital.

And then the blurs became even thicker. The time spent in the hospital’s waiting room seemed to be going backwards as far Kanade was concerned. There was no news during the time of Kei’s conditions, just silence and nurses running back and forth between different rooms. Both Naruto and Sakura eventually fell asleep waiting; their day had been long and they were still drowsy when they got the call. But Kanade staid up. She didn’t feel tired. She needed to know if Kei would be fine.

The clock had struck 3:30. A doctor clad in dirty scrubs walked up to her and gave a slight nudge to her, like she actually fallen asleep. “You may see him now, he’s going to pull through.” He sounded certain, so Kei would be normal eventually. Well, if their parents didn’t murder them for wrecking the car and giving them heart attacks. Wanting to talk with him alone, she left her still sleeping parents at the couch and went into the room given to Kei.

He looked a bit like hamburger to be blunt. Kei had been bandaged all over, but Kanade could still plainly see the bumps and bruises through the wrapping. His skin still held a slight ting of red from all the blood…Kanade looked away as she started to distinctly recall the accident scene. Kei’s first thing he said upon seeing his sister? “What time is it?”

“It’s 3:33.” Kanade gave a quick glance at her watch.

Kei smacked his lips before continuing. “So on top of sneaking out of the house, wrecking one of the cars, making a long hospital bill and nearly dying…we missed the concert?”

“That’s the most important thing to ask me after getting out of a long surgery?” Kanade groaned, throwing up her arms. “You could have died! Or be crippled! Or have eat all of your food through a straw!”

“But I’m alive now and don’t worry about that…well, unless Mom decided to finish the job the car started.” Kei did the best shrug he could with his dislocated arm. “So let’s focus on fixing the problems we have instead of worrying about what didn’t happen.”

“You’re such a idiot.” Kanada moaned out loud as she slumped against the wall.

“Well, I guess it was my distinct lack of a brain that saved me.” Kei giggled. Kanade kept herself from getting up and strangling her brother. She was for a long month of listening to her brother’s bad jokes, her parent’s shouting her ear off…and she finally dozed off. She might as well sleep in this plastic chair, it might be her last somewhat peaceful sleep for a long time…

I hate doing this, I view this as greedy and selfish…but I felt alone last year, so I’ll do this to see what fish bite.

My birthday is May 27th. It’s also the same as AtomicTiki’s so consider giving the better artist a gift as well.

Honestly not expecting much, but hopefully people will get something for AT.

  • Listening to: MST3K
  • Reading: This
  • Watching: MST3K
  • Playing: Pockie Pirates
  • Eating: Nothing
  • Drinking: Cranberry Juice

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BlackEyeHawk
Sylvin Wallace
United States
Current Residence: Arlington, TX
Favourite genre of music: 90's Rock
Favourite cartoon character: Scooby-Doo
Personal Quote: I'm here for the fans!
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:iconreflex76:
REFLEX76 Featured By Owner 9 hours ago
How do you get so much commission work?  I find it hard to get people to commission me, for some reason.
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:iconblackeyehawk:
BlackEyeHawk Featured By Owner 7 hours ago
I don't get much commission work; I usually get the same people, one time customers, and the crazies who give me a story to write out a story.

Maybe you should make a commission sheet with exact prices. And hit the forums as well.
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wallacexteam Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Student Digital Artist
thanks for the watch me ^^
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:iconblackeyehawk:
BlackEyeHawk Featured By Owner 21 hours ago
Yer welcome!

You up to a art trade?
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AndyofIndiana Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2015  Hobbyist
I know you have commissioned at least two pictures with the Ayla X Queen Zeal pairing.  I have not played Chrono Trigger (most RPG's aren't my thing) and my curiosity about the series comes entirely from The Kingdom of Zeal being under the TV Tropes category of Crapsaccharine World.  Queen Zeal seems to be a crazy woman who wants immortality from Lavos, a gargantuan porcupine with a weird mouth.  Ayla is a cavewoman who is the leader of her tribe and the type of woman Queen Zeal would discriminate against (i.e. non-magic user). Tell me, is this just another crack pairing, or was there anything in Chrono Trigger between Queen Zeal and Ayla that could be mistaken for sexual tension?
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BlackEyeHawk Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2015
Tis just crack. Fun old crack.
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kaspired Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015
An extra thanks for fav'n something from the scrapbook!
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YuskiSakura Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015
: P Uh huh and that's why so many forums actually get closed because "no one cares"
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BlackEyeHawk Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015
No, they close because nobody posted anything in that topic. Either that, or the topic creator closes it because they got what they wanted.
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YuskiSakura Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015
Riiiight. I've never seen a thread closed because of morbidman or Mrs-Durden. That's sarcasm if you didn't catch it.
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