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Feeling a bit bored, so I need a project.

So how about something crazy as getting one of my femslash ships to be a bit more popular?

In this case, Ino x Tsunade. About as random as it gets, but hey, the Naruto fandom has done crazier and stupider things before. Why not?

Obviously we need both fan art and fan fiction. I'm currently working on the latter, but others can do it as well. I'm willing to pay both actual money and points plus I can trade for some work, but this is mostly a invitation to people looking for something new or different to do. 

Why? Why not? Let's have some fun! Go wild and crazy! And stuff!

Make sure to post the results in the comments below!
They, being the kids at the local school, say if you go to the graveyard hidden in the forest about a mile southwest of the church at night and placed a lighted candle on the gravestone of a someone named Florence, you can see a ghost rise out and fly over the moon.

So of course people were dared to go there and get a picture of the ghost. Nearly all of the dares ended with a picture of a moon and clouds but no ethereal being hanging in the night sky. The dare’s appeal waned over time; the legend changed to get people to go there and perform the deed despite the many times the legend had been debunked. The specific frame of time, the setting of the moon, how clear or unclear the sky is, the candle itself lead to many variations on how to summon this ghost. The legend faded into misty obscurity for many years…until a short revival in 2009.

Young Jeremy Waters wanted to fit in at the new school. Just moved away from a smaller town out west, and the taunts of ‘hick’ and ‘redneck’ bored into his skull every time he stepped out into the hall. Jeremy didn’t want to start any fights despite the insults and physical bullying he had to endure each and every day. He knew that by going to a adult, he would be called a snitch and the bullying would continue with more momentum. Starting a fight against these legitimate threats? Only he would get detention (For being the new kid who attacked a well-liked football star) and the mockery would evolve into bitter scorn. He just wanted a friend!

But within his boundless luck, Jeremy got the worst possible solution. He learned about the legend from a group of old men discussing it in the town library. At lunch time, he declared he would tonight perform the deed and capture the ghost on film. Various oohs and laughs filled the air, but the challenge was made and Jeremy packed a second backpack to go into the graveyard that night.

The air felt colder than the usual November weather as he stepped into the forest. Jeremy did at least bring along a thick jacket to wear. His feet crunched over wet leaves and snapped fallen branches as he followed the muddy path through the thick foliage. He had a general idea of where to go, the graveyard at least covered a square mile. Jeremy quickly wondered how people even got to the graveyard in the first place (In truth, the graveyard hadn’t been used in a hundred years where the coffin had to be carried on foot to the grave.) right before he stubbed his foot into a bent piece of iron. Clenching his foot in pain, he looked up to see a rusted fence leaning over.

He found the graveyard.

Jeremy gulped and stepped around the fallen fence into the graveyard proper. The place felt a great deal eerily quiet and empty. But Jeremy didn’t feel alone, oh no. He could feel the gaze of several disembodied eyes following him as he searched for the grave of Florence. The legend said the grave laid somewhere in the middle, but he didn’t know where exactly he came in from. Jeremy’s pace quickened with each and every step he made in the graveyard, to the point where he broke out into a panicking run.

A unusual smell came onto his nostrils. Not wet flora or the decomposing bodies, but something…cherry.

“Hey hick.” Came a coarse voice. Jeremy turned to meet a elbow thrusting into his face. With a fractured nose, Jeremy went down to the ground in a sprawling mess. Crying out in pain, Jeremy could feel a strong foot standing on his stomach. “Thought it would be a good place to teach you a lesson.”

“A lesson in what?” Jeremy shouted back.

“You don’t belong here, and you shouldn’t make a attempt to belong with us.” The voice sneered back, pushing his boot into Jeremy’s ribs. “Pig-fucker!” Another kick, and Jeremy got rolled back. “You knock up your sister as well!” Another insult, another kick. Jeremy couldn’t tell if his bones were still intact.

A sharp woosh, a dull thump, a grunt of pain, and the rustling leaves and everything stopped. Jeremy didn’t know what to do; pain constantly rocked his entire body. He took a few seconds before rolling over and seeing his bully on the ground. The bully’s head had caved in, and blood fled out of the cracks in the skull and flooded the ground around the bully’s head. Jeremy cried out and quickly jumped up to his feet in alarm.

“I’m sorry.”

For the second time, he turned around and spotted a sight that drove Jeremy into a thick madness. A dirty and blood-stained girl carrying a wet shovel, and with the most disfigured face Jeremy had ever seen out of a cartoon. He started into a screaming fit as he scurried out of the graveyard. His hair started to go white from the shock as he continued to wail out in pure horrifying torment.

“I’m sorry.” The girl repeated as she started to bury the dead bully. She repeated, “I’m sorry.” She finished the burial and left the body in the open grave for later. She dragged her shovel behind her as she repeated her phrase.

Jeremy was never the same. His hair had gone white and his whole appearance had given him twenty years. He could only scream now, a long wail of pain. Nobody could get him to do anything, and he would wolf down any food given. The police had tried to question him on the murder of a boy found in a open grave, but all Jeremy can do is scream.

And the legend lives on. Go to the hidden graveyard at night and light a candle on a gravestone named Florence. A ghost will appear in the sky. And you’ll hear a little girl say “I’m sorry.”

I hate doing this, I view this as greedy and selfish…but I felt alone last year, so I’ll do this to see what fish bite.

My birthday is May 27th. It’s also the same as AtomicTiki’s so consider giving the better artist a gift as well.

Honestly not expecting much, but hopefully people will get something for AT.

  • Listening to: MST3K
  • Reading: This
  • Watching: MST3K
  • Playing: Pockie Pirates
  • Eating: Nothing
  • Drinking: Cranberry Juice

I hate doing this, I view this as greedy and selfish…but I felt alone last year, so I’ll do this to see what fish bite.

My birthday is May 27th. It’s also the same as AtomicTiki’s so consider giving the better artist a gift as well.

Honestly not expecting much, but hopefully people will get something for AT.

  • Listening to: MST3K
  • Reading: This
  • Watching: MST3K
  • Playing: Pockie Pirates
  • Eating: Nothing
  • Drinking: Cranberry Juice

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BlackEyeHawk
Sylvin Wallace
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Current Residence: Arlington, TX
Favourite genre of music: 90's Rock
Favourite cartoon character: Scooby-Doo
Personal Quote: I'm here for the fans!
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:iconsonicus1000:
SonicUS1000 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Happy Birthday.  :party: :)
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:iconblackeyehawk:
BlackEyeHawk Featured By Owner 1 day ago
Thank ye kindly!
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photondebugger Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Student General Artist
Happy birthday!! :)
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:iconblackeyehawk:
BlackEyeHawk Featured By Owner 1 day ago
Tomorrow, I'll get started on the story again. Thanks amiga!
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photondebugger Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Student General Artist
No problem :3 take your time!
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glamourpink Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks for the fav. !!! ♥
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johnnyd2 Featured By Owner 2 days ago
happy birthday man ^^
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:iconblackeyehawk:
BlackEyeHawk Featured By Owner 2 days ago
Thanks.

Sorry to say, I tried and failed to do the Smash movesets. So go ahead and ask for a story if you wish, I'll give you a 50% discount.
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johnnyd2 Featured By Owner 2 days ago
i see
oh yeah, i was wondering about that XD
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BlackEyeHawk Featured By Owner 2 days ago
Yeah...sorry.
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